for some time
it never crossed my mind
that it could’ve been one so close to me
so my initial response was
amazement
shock
confusion
dismay
‘cause I never thought it could’ve been this way
never saw it happening like this
with me all the time
i thought my best interests were in her mind
but never could I have been more wrong
for so many years
for time so long
I trusted her
blindly
only to one day see
that she indeed
was not she
but them
I wanted to cry
(and I did)
cause it had all been a lie
the saddest part being
not the story told
but the story unknown
to her
that she was them
not she all this time
influencing me
hurt
but I couldn’t bring myself to tell her
the truth
because I didn’t know what this would mean for us
what would happen to her
where she would go
would we or could we be friends
how she would feel
so I just let it go
on
until I realized
I’d taken her place
now she was me
and because of me
we were dying
unintentionally
it was done
never had she wanted to mislead me
but I was choosing to hold the key
willingly
choosing not to set us free
amazed confused
in shock and dismay
holding the power
yet deprived of power
all because I
had never seen it this way
had never thought that
it could have been me
misleading me
killing me
yet holding the key
to set me and her
who is indeed me
free
but somehow
during this state of dismay
I came to see it didn’t have to be the way it was—
what if I had not one day seen
that she indeed
was not truly she
but them influencing me—
I saw what could’ve been
and then that same fear that once held me down
I feel you!
This poem is so beautiful. It's so real.
i see.
Okay more comments- Its just that many people wont understand this, or even see it as vivid as you wrote it. My condolences for your lost. So you can see the operational movements of the enemy being the 'them". .And so you see holding a joy is the answer to overstanding (uplifting) the downpression.......
the ancients....they know and they are watching.
I am praying for more victory on your part, and on our team...and know that i see